Once there was a man named Mr. Prickle. He had a pig named Fren. Fren was shy but she wasn’t shy to Mr. Prickle. When Mr. Prickle goes to sleep Fren gets into big trouble. When Mr. Prickle gets up he sees mud in the house. The next day he saw six pigs in his house. That was too many for him. So he sold all of them and everybody took one. So that was the end of Mr. Prickle.
The End.
Written by Nicholas P. 2/24/07
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And I thought I had too much time on my hands!
How was it the end of Mr. Pickle? Did the piggies do something to him!? EEEK! I had no idea pigs were so vengeful. Very enlightening.
Thanks for sharing!
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I don't know... lol
I guess the swine didn't take too kindly to being sold.
My Bad! I was in a hurry, scanned the post too quickly and didn't notice the author. Thought Mike was losing his mind...but for Nick, can I have his autograph for future financial security.
Actually I added Nick's signature after you read it...
Trying to make me look bad...I see!
You know, Nick has all the foundational elements of a good story. He has a beginning, middle, end. He has a conflict. He has stakes... The kid's going to be writing some amazing stories as he gets older & learns how to develop them!
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